Crashing


Crashing

by: JP Leddy

Imploding into

Folding under

Falling over

Smashing through

Painfully

Tearfully

Achingly

Tortuously

Love left me

when he said

it left him

I went

crashing

into

a

bottle

of

drunken

stupor.

This poem is under consideration for Thursday Poets Rally Week 29 ( Sept 23 -29)

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39 thoughts on “Crashing

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  3. The image is amazing…the poem even more so…Very clear…powerful…straight to the heart…in words, lay out, rythm…You hit the mark! This is a perfect poem in the world I live in!!

  4. Hello there, JP!

    I liked your choice of words…very fitting,
    and it was fun tongue-work to pronounce them aloud.

    Nice to meet you, and be careful with those stupors, okay?

    Peace, 🙂 UT

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