By: JP Leddy
My eyes entranced
My heart enraptured
My head lightheaded
My ears burning
My stomach fluttering
My palms sweating
My desire building
My lips wanting
what is beautiful…
Submitted to Thursday Poets RallyWeek 31
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very magical build up of the beauty here.
Thank you, Jingle. I had fun composing this one.
Glad to have you in…
your image is super cute.
love this entry very much!
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Beauty attracts, absolutely. Look at Craigery 🙂
Good point, mairmusic.
If you feel beautiful, you are beautiful. Beautiful site, beautiful poem.
I like it.
Well said…beautiful inside and out!
Surrounded by beauty! Nicely done.
Thank you for your comments… liv2!
Wonderful piece. Very heartwarming.
Thank you for visiting and the comments.
Very nice, you can feel the longing
Thank you, Diamonds for the perceptive comments.
As always your words warm my heart…well done my friend xxx
I enjoyed the imagery!
Appreciate your visit and comments.
short sweet and to the point goodstuffs
awww I want to experience this feeling again!!
Kinda makes me think that more things could make you feel this way if we just take the time to recognize them! Thanks for the reminder.
Here is my post for week 31
Glad that you experienced these feelings.
poets rally participation awards.
let me know after you are done 18 poets visiting…
thanks a lot.
Wonderful. I hope you were able to share your lips with that beauty. A wonderful poem with a positive sentiment of longing and desire. ^_^
Thank you for your warm words.
Sounds like the taste of a fine wine! Beautiful! and that is how it feels to me as well! Have a great day!
Thanks, buddy, for your comments.
A moment, a very powerful moment captured in your words. Lovely!
You captured the anticipation of it. And I love that you added the song.
Sure appreciated your comments.
I think I read what’s beautiful.. and that’s this poem 😀
Oh thank you…
The beautiful is indeed like a drug, innit? You have evoked its singular effect wonderfully.
Thanks for your comment about my rally entry! I liked the way you build this one; the progression seems spot on.
Appreciate your feedback
I found your poem Beautiful very errotic thank you
I am glad you liked it.
Beautiful words! Give it to the object of your affection, and I’m sure she’ll fall in love (if she hasn’t already)! 🙂
what started this…..Hope this continues for a while 😉
nice..and love the whole theme of love as Beauty…nice to meet you at the potluck..bkm
Thanks for visiting and commenting. I actually had to repost my link to the poem I submitted for the Potluck here it is if you want to check it out.
Lovely poem! I love the song choice too! 😀
Thank you very much, adkwriter.
simple and still beautiful, i love the way you painted such a picture with so few words…..good job!
This took my breath…love it. Well done.
This time I will choose not to be fooled.. Ha ha.. This poem is about being drunk right?? 😉
He he he.. Smart poem.. !
Yearning for everything beautiful. Nice job. Sorry for the late visit from Rally.
Poem on …
Simple words yet it bring out the best in each feature.. 🙂 The words just match and fit perfectly with each other.. You are 9th on my list and this is the simplest yet with the deepest impression (I am certain) it is going to leave.. 🙂
More or less like the word “Desire” transformed into a poem..nice.
lovely poem-loving thoughts
🙂 thanks for stopping by my place
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Ooohh.. very descriptive.. and very alluring!
My senses fleeting
My arms flailing
My lungs filling
My body swaying
Towards words enticing! 🙂
A very nicely written poem, JP! And a super tribute to anything and everything beautiful!
Thanks, Kavita….I am glad you enjoyed it!