The Light Through The Window
A Poem by: JP Leddy
The light through the window
lands on my hands as
words pour into the bright screen
where my feelings seem to move
from my heart out of my fingernails
simply to prove that I am alive
not only from oxygen but from
the drama of life with its ups and downs
and the yearnings of my soul to be held
not only by adoring arms but by one
who sees me for who I am and needs me to
complete his life’s journey .
I look out the window and the light continues
to come in not only to lay rest upon my hands
but now I feel it inside me filling
me with illumination.
This has touched me my friend, deep words from within. I send you love xx
I always appreciate hearing your thoughts on my work, Amanda. Have a wonderful holiday weekend, dear friend
I look out the window and the light continues
to come in not only to lay rest upon my hands
but now I feel it inside me filling
me with illumination.
that’s beautiful,
love your words.
🙂
Oh Jingle, Thank you. Your support means everything.
JP
I can feel the powerful longing… Good job, JP 🙂
I have some awards for you, will be honored if you accept it 🙂
Thank you! I feel honored with the awards.
JP
lovely lives…. very vivid.
thanQ 4 sharing it….
keep versing…
viva la vida 🙂
Thank you, Anky…Viva La Vida!
JP
Beautiful words.
They’ve touched me in places that often lay dormant…
Thank you,
Peace,
http://notjeffery1.wordpress.com/2010/08/18/silence/
Mine for the rally.
Thank you, notjeffrey. Your comments meant a lot to me.
JP
Glad to see you in…
loved this poem,
very bright image and your words are magnificent!
You write these poignant words simply, without drama, and that gives your work strength. Nicely done!
http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/
Thank you, mairmusic
I like the images, the light on your hands as your feeling pour out through them. Good work.
what a lovely poignant writeup, sharing the two lives that go through.. imagery is simple, and attractive too..!
My Poem For The Rally
Leo,
Your comments mean so much to me. Thank you.
JP
Deep and lovely and I like it a lot…
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cheers
Thank you, Dakshima
JP
Each and every word in this poem is powerful enough to go straight to the heart and hit it hard. Very deep.
Thank you for your comments, Alethea. I appreciate how my work affects the readers.
JP
I love the flow and the rhythm.
My Poets Rally Poem: http://robinelizabeth58.wordpress.com/2010/08/05/falling-august-5-2010/
Thank you, Robin. You are a wonderful writer.
JP
great piece thanks for sharing!!! I have two awards for you if you’d like to accept
http://peachpitproduction.wordpress.com/2010/09/12/blogger-awards/
Oh Ms. Peaches! Thank you!
JP
you just have to love the light
http://hindawy.wordpress.com/2010/09/07/a-better-me-for-you/
Thank you hindawy for your comments.
JP
Warmly written. Looking through window. I did that all the time too 🙂 The light bring hope and strength.
Willie, so well said.
Thank you,
JP
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/09/monday-poetry-potluck-kings-queens-and.html
Hello, friend:
Monday Poetry Potluck Is NOW open, linking is open from Sunday 8pm to Tuesday, 8pm, welcome join us by linking in 1 to 3 poems, you could use an old poem, the more you share, the happier we are…hurry up!
Thanks in advance.
Hope to see you in our lovely potluck…
I think i’ve told you in the the past how much i enjoy your poems, keep writing more =]