Your Smile
By: JP Leddy
My occupied mind was emptied by your smile…
That stopped my rushing feet at the subway station…
Locked in also by your piercing eyes , you had me…
From the first hello to the nights that followed…
Our bodies and souls collided in immediate chemistry…
Finding myself considering possibilities never imagined…
Yearning for your smile when it is absent from my day…
Thankful for that wonderful first moment, I find now …
A smile upon my face revealing a happiness unconstrained…
Submitted to Monday’s Poetry Potluck Photograph’s , Memories, and Nostalgia
I also thank our kind Poet Leader Jingle for the Creative Blog Award and as tradition would like to pass the award onto my fellow poets Jamie Dede, David Waters, Olivia, Kavita and Fiveloaf.
lovely thought. a smile can be a great hook 🙂
bendedspoon,
A smile can win over a heart.
JP
Beautiful word play.. more smiles.. xx
Yes, Olivia! More smiles!
JP
Curious that the idea of writing about a certain smile also occurred to me… I particularly like the first line! It says everything.
Seabell,
Thanks for your visit. Smiles always inspire me!
JP
a smile could loose all the tensions at times.
sweet message..
A++
😉
Thanks, Ji!
JP
awww so sweet!! 🙂
Enjoy the rally!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/04/04/a-silent-cry/
JP, what a tender sweet poem. I love it. Read it over a few times. Savoring. Lovely. Thank you!
Congratulation on the Award. Perfect for you indeed.
And thank you for passing the Creative Blog award on to me. Means a lot, JP, and much valued coming from you.
Blessings …
Jamie, you are so sweet.
Thank you again and I am glad to pass the award to you.
JP
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Smiles can carry a lot of power! So beautifully described here–what a smile can do for someone else.