By: JP Leddy
No longer suffocating under the weight of it…
I see freedom in breath flowing in my lungs of life…
Lifting me and feeling me breathing up out of despair…
No longer trapped in hurt but feeling the promise of love…
Someday for me that will make my heart light and float…
As I become a feather enjoying being swirled in joy…
Submitted to Thursday’s Poet Rally 42
- striving of man – control of our thoughts (cyberwaves.wordpress.com)
- Breathing and Yoga Practice (lifeissublime.wordpress.com)
“a feather swirled in joy…”
Thank you, Jamie….May we all be feathers.
bless you..keep faith.
This is great! Keep it up!
Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem, goldenhair.
I like the idea of breathing up. I’m going to tr y doing that (when I get rid of this miserable cold enough to breathe, that is).
LOL. You do that!
“breathing up out of despair”– great image! Love this.
Thank you and I appreciate you dropping by.
claim the awards in my post if you wish, thanks for the perfect contribution.
I will do that.
Peace… That is all that comes to my mind when I read it… Lovely… 🙂
So glad that my work gave you that. It touches me.
Incredible last line.. wishing you some wings n feathers!!
Much love xox
Thank you for the touching wish.
Utterly delightful. Incredibly serene. A real sense of paradise is felt in these lines you’ve scribed.
I appreciate your kind words.
like the final line and appreciate the joy- almost ecstatic. Thanks for visiting my site.
Thank you, Paul.
I am glad that we can enjoy eachother’s work.
I love the feather image! I will think of this whenever my yoga teacher says, “breath up” now.
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