34 thoughts on “Heart Master”

1. this days genuineness is vanishing,nicely written.the only thing we have is hope,a thought of a new dawn .

2. So true, Colourfade.

   Thanks for your visit.

   JP

3. It’s a little melodramatic, but I think that was your intension, no? I like the term, “lover-less.” It sounds good.

4. Anarchist,

   Love or the longing for it brings the melodramatic in all all of us…our poems, our songs, our emotions…so yep…I went there…LOL. Thanks for your visit.

   JP

5. For the embrace that goes beyond momentary climax

   I know this longing very well….beautifully written my friend.

6. David,

   Thanks, friend.

   JP

7. Such a beautiful write on the yearning of meeting one’s counterpart – excellent write as always!

8. Anthony,

   Thanks.

   JP

9. awesome love this one. best part Lover-less I wait under the cloud of unbelief…

10. Swanrose,

    So appreciate your visit and comments.

    JP

11. Very touching–I could feel the intensity of wanting that special someone. I really enjoyed this, JP.

    Gayle

12. Gayle,

    Thank you so much. Your comments and visit mean a lot.

    JP

13. Love the sense of longing you create in this poem, great job!

14. Thank you, Thoughts!!!

    JP

15. the passion or longing for love is evidently shown in your words.
    Glad to see you back.

    Thanks for the visit to my piece.

16. I am glad to be back, Ji!

    Thanks for your comments!

    JP

17. Heart master… hmmmm… Brings several thoughts to the fore. Mastering the heart or the master ruling hearts … ? Interesting… and in the beginning the stars ‘tugging’ . Well phrased.

18. Love your perspective, Kiran!

19. Very beautiful you have truly captured longing

20. Mind,

    Thank you for your comments and visit.

    JP

21. I can understand, and relate to that feeling, JP..!

22. Leo,

    Our human connection.

    JP

23. Sounds like your protagonist needs to step back and figure out a new plan. Nice write.

24. Mair,

    True..LOL

    JP

25. This is the most touching poem. So sad, So true. So universal in its quest.

26. Jamie,

    Love..sigh…the search for it…

    JP

27. P.S.: Love Clay Aikens. Thanks for the musical Sunday night interlude. 🙂

28. Jamie,

    A little Clay now and then is good.

    JP

29. Wow… well put and so poignantly true. I love these lines: So many drift in and out of my bed… / None stay within the chamber of my heart…

30. Beautiful…..

31. I was touched by the yearning and longing you captured and the faint light of hope at the end. We all need that light of hope. 🙂 A lovely piece. I enjoyed reading your work.

32. May your heart see the dreams of your soul turning into reality!

    Thank you very much for the unique comment you left at my blog! It was most delightful!

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